Stalker Sequence

This is our first attempt at a short media project, we decided to create a Short Stalking Sequence. We believe we have framed our shots well, and there are the same number of shots we'd planned in our brief pre-production session, however we have a few issues with pacing upon editing.
Some shots do not flow into one another very well, and it appears disjointed.
However overall we are happy with our work.